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The weight
It pushes her down
keeps her from flying
from spreading her forgotten wings

slithering on the ground
with the weight on her back
she calls for help
for someone to help her up
but they ignore her
shun her as a lost soul
refusing to help her find it

they walk past her
pretend she feels no pain
throw rocks at her
forgetting what she used to be

rain drops dampen her body
tears run down her cheeks
she tries to push herself up
but the weight of her sorrow is too much
too unbearable
she falls back down
never to get up again.
it sucks...
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:iconsilentdark:
silentdark Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2004
from spreading her forgotten wings

I really like that line. Great job! :D
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:iconhollow-nothing:
hollow-nothing Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2004
thanks
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:icondeadlydandelion:
deadlydandelion Featured By Owner May 30, 2004
:clap: nice job... now I wonder... why are they forgotten wings? nice though.
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:iconhollow-nothing:
hollow-nothing Featured By Owner May 23, 2004
thanks
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The7thDay Featured By Owner May 22, 2004
Very good poem.
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:iconboundbydarkness:
BoundByDarkness Featured By Owner May 22, 2004
i love this poem... and im not just saying that... by the time i got done reading it i was almost crying... heh. it brought a clear picture into my head and it scared me. this poem definitely had an effect.
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:icondeadreflection13:
deadreflection13 Featured By Owner May 22, 2004
i dosent suck
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:iconhollow-nothing:
hollow-nothing Featured By Owner May 22, 2004
thanks
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:icondeadreflection13:
deadreflection13 Featured By Owner May 22, 2004
no problem
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hottubmolly Featured By Owner May 22, 2004
i don't think it sucks at all!!!!!!!!! :claps:
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